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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Nov. 15 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

F: I have just baked [ cooked ] some muffins.

M: Now I understand where this good smell is coming from.

F: It's almost tea time. Would you like my muffins with tea?

No. 2

M: I'm home. I'm exhausted today, and I want to take a long bath.

F: You must be tired. I'll run a bath for you. Would you like a

lavender bath?

M: That's nice of you.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

F: I've just baked some muffins. M: Now I understand where this good smell is coming from. F: It's almost tea time.

— Mister Micawber

  • F: I've just baked some muffins.
  • M: Now I understand where this good smell is coming from.
  • F: It's almost tea time.
  • Would you like a muffin with tea?
  • M: I'm home.
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F: I've just baked some muffins.
M: Now I understand where this good smell is coming from.
F: It's almost tea time. Would you like a muffin with tea?

M: I'm home. I'm exhausted, and I want to take a long bath.
F: You must be tired. I'll run your bath for you. Would you like a lavender bath?
M: That'd be nice!
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Kenta F: It's almost tea time. Would you like my muffins with tea?
Some native speakers would take this as suggesting the person might consume them all.

Would you like to try my muffins with some tea? ("Try" would be the same as "sample" verb, and would suggest only one or two.)

Would you care for a muffin with your tea?
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Thank you, both. You always help me. I appreciate your comments.

kenji
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