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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Nov 12 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: What a lovely day! Let's go on a picnic.
F: I'd rather stay at home. I don't feel like going out.
M: I never expected you'd say so. What's wrong?
F: I have a slight headache.
No. 2
M: Hello. Welcome to Takeoka City. What brings you here?
F: Well, I came here to take pictures. This city is very popular
for its beautiful scenery.
M: Good. I hope you have a good time here.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: What a lovely day! Let's go on a picnic.
F: I'd rather stay at home. I don't feel like going out.
M: I never expected you'd say so. What's wrong?
F: I have a slight headache.
No. 2
M: Hello. Welcome to Takeoka City. What brings you here?
F: Well, I came here to take pictures. This city is very popular
for its beautiful scenery.
M: Good. I hope you have a good time here.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: What a lovely day! Let's go on a picnic.
- Hi, No.
- 1 M: What a lovely day!
- Let's go on a picnic.
- F: I'd rather stay home ( home is an adverb; at is redundant).
- I don't feel like going out.
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Hi,
No. 1
M: What a lovely day! Let's go on a picnic.
F: I'd rather stay home (home is an adverb; at is redundant). I don't feel like going out.
M: I didn't expect you would say so. What's wrong?
F: I don't know. I seem to have a headache, apparently.
No. 2
M: Hello, and welcome to Takaoka. What brings you here?
No. 1
M: What a lovely day! Let's go on a picnic.
F: I'd rather stay home (home is an adverb; at is redundant). I don't feel like going out.
M: I didn't expect you would say so. What's wrong?
F: I don't know. I seem to have a headache, apparently.
No. 2
M: Hello, and welcome to Takaoka. What brings you here?
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Hi, Regards. You taught me natural English.
Thank you very much! kenta
Thank you very much! kenta
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