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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( May 30 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: How about going fishing in the Ayano River this weekend?
F: Great. Then why don't we go to a fishing-tackle store this evening?
M: OK. I'm just thinking about [ of ] buying a new fishing rod.
No. 2
M: I'm home [ back ]! I'm starving!
F: Hi, sweetie, you look very happy. What?
M: We played basketball in PE. I dunked a shot and we won!
F: Way to go!
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: How about going fishing in the Ayano River this weekend?
F: Great. Then why don't we go to a fishing-tackle store this evening?
M: OK. I'm just thinking about [ of ] buying a new fishing rod.
No. 2
M: I'm home [ back ]! I'm starving!
F: Hi, sweetie, you look very happy. What?
M: We played basketball in PE. I dunked a shot and we won!
F: Way to go!
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: How about going fishing in the Ayano River this weekend? F: Great.
- Hi, No.
- 1 M: How about going fishing in the Ayano River this weekend?
- F: Great.
- Then why don't we go to a fishing-tackle store this evening?
- If they are keen fishermen, they'd probably say the name of the store.
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Hi,
No. 1
M: How about going fishing in the Ayano River this weekend?
F: Great. Then why don't we go to a fishing-tackle store this evening? If they are keen fishermen, they'd probably say the name of the store.
M: OK. I'm just thinking about [ of ] buying a new fishing rod.
No. 2
M: I'm home [back ]! I'm starving!
No. 1
M: How about going fishing in the Ayano River this weekend?
F: Great. Then why don't we go to a fishing-tackle store this evening? If they are keen fishermen, they'd probably say the name of the store.
M: OK. I'm just thinking about [ of ] buying a new fishing rod.
No. 2
M: I'm home [
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