0
Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( May 26 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: We're talking about going for a drink. How about you?

F: This evening? I'd love to.

M: Good. That makes five of us. We need a beer after a hard day

like today.

No. 2

M: Would you like some company? [ Care for some company? ]

F: How nice! I was going to eat all by myself.

M: Shall we go to my friend's place? It's just around the corner.

F: Great! Let's hurry. I'm starving.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi, No. 1 M: We're talking about going for a drink. How about you?

— Clive

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: We're talking about going for a drink.
  • How about you?
  • F: This evening?
  • I'd love to.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

4 Answers
0
Hi,

No. 1

M: We're talking about going for a drink. How about you?

F: This evening? I'd love to.

M: Good. That makes five of us. We need a beer after a hard day

like today.

Pretty good!
0
0
Hi, Clive. I mean "place" is a restaurant.

Is that OK? Thank you, anyway.

kenta
0
0
Hi,

Is that OK? Yes, as long as the listener knows that your friend has a restaurant. Otherwise, you'd probably explain a bit more.



Clive
0
0
Hi, Clive. Your comment is very clear and understandable.

Thank you. kenta
0

Related Questions