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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( May 24 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: How would you like your hair today?

F: I'd like a shampoo and a perm.

M: How would you like your perm?

F: Could you give me a hard-waved perm?

No. 2

M: That guy is a very good actor. He's very old and not so

handsome, but a charactor actor.

F: Oh, he is Morgan Freeman.

M: You got it! I saw him in a lot of movies.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

M: How would you like your hair today? F: I'd like a shampoo and a perm (please) . M: How would you like your perm?

  • M: How would you like your hair today?
  • F: I'd like a shampoo and a perm (please) .
  • M: How would you like your perm?
  • F: Could you give me a hard-waved perm?
  • -- There are zero Google hits for "hard-waved perm", so I don't think it's a known English term (though I suppose one can imagine what it might mean).
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M: How would you like your hair today?

F: I'd like a shampoo and a perm (please).

M: How would you like your perm?

F: Could you give me a hard-waved perm? -- There are zero Google hits for "hard-waved perm", so I don't think it's a known English term (though I suppose one can imagine what it might mean).

No. 2

M: That guy is a very good actor.
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Hi, Mr Wordy. Sorry for my mistake ( duplicate ).

Thank you for your comments. I learned a lot.

kenta

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