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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( May 11 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: With so many of your competitors going out of [ withdrawing with the ] business,

you can expect to receive a bonus this year?

F: I hope so, but I'll have to wait until next year.

M: Really? I believe you deserve it.

No. 2

M: With this cold weather, the price of vegetables has really gone up.

F: Right. Also, I read a lot of chickens were killed [ destroyed ] because of bird flu.

M: I know. We have to live economically.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: With so many of your competitors going out of business , can you expect to receive a bonus this year? F: I hope so, but I'l l probably have to wait until next year.

— Mister Micawber

  • No.
  • 1 M: With so many of your competitors going out of business , can you expect to receive a bonus this year?
  • F: I hope so, but I'l l probably have to wait until next year.
  • M: Really?
  • Too bad.
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No. 1

M: With so many of your competitors going out of business, can you expect to receive a bonus this year?

F: I hope so, but I'll probably have to wait until next year.

M: Really? Too bad. You deserve one.

No. 2

M: With this cold weather, the price of vegetables has really gone up.

F: Yeah. Also, I read
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Hi, Mr Micawber. You used 'cull'. Now I see.

Thank you very much. kenta
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