Would you correct my English? (Mar.24)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

M: What happened to Jim? I haven't seen him for a month.

F: Didn't you know? He was poached by our rival firm.

M: You mean he's no longer in our office? What will become of [ What about ] our

ongoing project?

No. 2

M: Are there any questions before we begin the test?

F: May I [ we ] look at books or notebooks during the test?

M: Sure. As I said earlier, this is a translation exam,

so you are allowed to refer to anything you have.

Thank you. kenta