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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Mar. 28 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: I have to tell you something. Well... I'm interested in you.
F: Interested in me? What do you mean?
M: Ah...you're always on my mind. Are you going out with me?
No. 2
M: We'll have squid ink spaghetti.
F: Would you like anything else? How about a dessert?
M: Can we have ( some ) coffee after dinner?
F: Certainly.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I have to tell you something. Well... I'm interested in you.
F: Interested in me? What do you mean?
M: Ah...you're always on my mind. Are you going out with me?
No. 2
M: We'll have squid ink spaghetti.
F: Would you like anything else? How about a dessert?
M: Can we have ( some ) coffee after dinner?
F: Certainly.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
No. 1 M: I have to tell you something. Well...
- No.
- 1 M: I have to tell you something.
- Well...
- I'm interested in you.
- F: Interested in me?
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No. 1
M: I have to tell you something. Well... I'm interested in you.
F: Interested in me? What do you mean?
M: Ah...you're always on my mind. Will you go out with me?
No. 2
M: We'll have the squid ink spaghetti.
F: Would you like anything else? How about a dessert?
M: Can we have ( some ) coffee after dinner?
F: Certainly.
M: I have to tell you something. Well... I'm interested in you.
F: Interested in me? What do you mean?
M: Ah...you're always on my mind. Will you go out with me?
No. 2
M: We'll have the squid ink spaghetti.
F: Would you like anything else? How about a dessert?
M: Can we have ( some ) coffee after dinner?
F: Certainly.
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Hi Kenta,
In the US, the waiter/waitress wouldn't take your dessert order when you ordered your main course.
To make this more natural (though not more grammatical),
F: Would you like a salad or any side dishes?
In the US, the waiter/waitress wouldn't take your dessert order when you ordered your main course.
To make this more natural (though not more grammatical),
F: Would you like a salad or any side dishes?
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