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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Mar. 23 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: How do you stay [ keep ] warm in this cold winter?
F: I don't like air conditioning [ an air conditioner ]. So I drink hot tea.
M: That's an economical solution. I put on disposable body warmers.
No. 2
M: Your bag looks so heavy!
F: It [ sure ] is. I love paper dictionaries.
M: Oh. How many dictionaries do you carry?
F: Just one. It is a Random House Dictionary.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: How do you stay [ keep ] warm in this cold winter?
F: I don't like air conditioning [ an air conditioner ]. So I drink hot tea.
M: That's an economical solution. I put on disposable body warmers.
No. 2
M: Your bag looks so heavy!
F: It [ sure ] is. I love paper dictionaries.
M: Oh. How many dictionaries do you carry?
F: Just one. It is a Random House Dictionary.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi kenta Your English is good! 1 either 'stay' or 'keep' warm is correct, they mean the same thing here. I don't think you mean air conditioning, that's what cools you down!
- Hi kenta Your English is good!
- 1 either 'stay' or 'keep' warm is correct, they mean the same thing here.
- I don't think you mean air conditioning, that's what cools you down!
- I think you mean heating.
- 2 You don't need the word 'paper' next to dictionaries.
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Hi kenta 
Your English is good! Just a few corrections
No.1
Your English is good! Just a few corrections
No.1
- either 'stay' or 'keep' warm is corre
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Hello. You helped me a lot.
Your comments are excellent!
Thank you. kenta
Your comments are excellent!
Thank you. kenta
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