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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Mar. 21 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: Hey, what are you doing ( in ) here?

F: Taro! What a pleasant surprise ( to see here )! Are you here for

your job?

M: No way! I'm just enjoying my holiday.

No. 2

M: Shall you and I start up a car pool? We live so close,

and we'd save a lot on gas.

F: Right. That's a good idea. And we can exchange a lot of information

with each other while driving to work.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi, No. 1 M: Hey, what are you doing ( in ) here? F: Taro!

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: Hey, what are you doing ( in ) here?
  • F: Taro!
  • What a nice (pleasant ) surprise !
  • ( to see here Are you here for your job?
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Hi,

No. 1



M: Hey, what are you doing ( in ) here?



F: Taro! What a nice (pleasant) surprise ! ( to see here Are you here for



your job?



M: No way! I'm just enjoying my holiday.



No. 2



M: How about Shall you and I start up a car pool?
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Hi, Clive. You always help me. Thank you very much!

kenta

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