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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Mar. 2 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Will you date with me? How about this Friday?
F: Well...I have an appointment.
M: When will you be free then?
F: Saturday is fine. Anytime after six would be all right ( with me ).
No. 2
M: It's awful weather, isn't it?
F: Sure. But the weather will change for the better.
M: Did the weather forecast said so?
F: Yes. Tomorrow we'll enjoy a crisp spring day.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Will you date with me? How about this Friday?
F: Well...I have an appointment.
M: When will you be free then?
F: Saturday is fine. Anytime after six would be all right ( with me ).
No. 2
M: It's awful weather, isn't it?
F: Sure. But the weather will change for the better.
M: Did the weather forecast said so?
F: Yes. Tomorrow we'll enjoy a crisp spring day.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
1 M: will you go on a date with me this Friday? F: well.... i have an appointment M: so when is the best time for you?
- 1 M: will you go on a date with me this Friday?
- F: well....
- i have an appointment M: so when is the best time for you?
- 2 M: don't you think the weather is awful?
- F: yeah, but the weather will get better M: did the weather forecast say so?
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Hey Kenta
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No.1
M: will you go on a date with me this Friday?
F: well.... i have an appointment
M: so when is the best time for you?
F: saturday is fine for me, anytime after six
No.2
M: don't you think the weather is awful?
F: yeah, but the weather will get better
M: did the weather forecast say so?
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No.1
M: will you go on a date with me this Friday?
F: well.... i have an appointment
M: so when is the best time for you?
F: saturday is fine for me, anytime after six
No.2
M: don't you think the weather is awful?
F: yeah, but the weather will get better
M: did the weather forecast say so?
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Hi,
I'll try to make these sound natural.
No. 1 (This very much depends on the age of the people talking)
M: Are you doing anything on Friday?
F: Well...sorry, I'm busy.
M: What day is good for you?
F: Saturday evening is fine.
I'll try to make these sound natural.
No. 1 (This very much depends on the age of the people talking)
M: Are you doing anything on Friday?
F: Well...sorry, I'm busy.
M: What day is good for you?
F: Saturday evening is fine.
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Is anything wrong with this usage?
'When will you be free then?' (in the original message.)
'When will you be free then?' (in the original message.)
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Hi,
This kind of thing (When . . . . . then?) is commonly said.
I'd put a comma before 'then'.
However, in the context of asking for a date, this particular question seems to me to be too direct. It suggests to me that the speaker is pressuring the other person too much.
Clive
This kind of thing (When . . . . . then?) is commonly said.
I'd put a comma before 'then'.
However, in the context of asking for a date, this particular question seems to me to be too direct. It suggests to me that the speaker is pressuring the other person too much.
Clive
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