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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( June 7 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Have you ever tried a revolving sushi bar?

F: No, this is the first time. What kind of fish is this?

M: This is not fish but natto-roll. This is very popular in Japan.

F: It smells awful. But I'll try it anyway.

No. 2

M: When I put on the breaks, I hear a strange noise.

F: OK. Maybe the break pads have worn away [ down ].

M: Would you replace them, then?

Thank you. kenta
  

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M: Have you ever been to (or: eaten in) a revolving sushi bar? F: No, this is my first time. What kind of fish is this?

  • M: Have you ever been to (or: eaten in) a revolving sushi bar?
  • F: No, this is my first time.
  • What kind of fish is this?
  • M: It's not fish but natto-roll.
  • It is very popular in Japan.
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M: Have you ever been to (or: eaten in) a revolving sushi bar?

F: No, this is my first time. What kind of fish is this?

M: It's not fish but natto-roll. It is very popular in Japan.

F: It smells awful. But I'll try it anyway.

M: I hear a strange noise when I put on the breaks.

F: OK, maybe the break pads have worn down.

M: Would you replace the
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Hi, JohnParis.

You helped me a lot. Thank you.

kenta
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Hi,

No. 1

M: Have you ever tried a revolving sushi bar before? (I don't know what this is.

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