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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Jun 9 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

M: What kind of dressing would you like on your salad?

F: Let me see.... French, please.

M: Certainly. Anything to drink?

F: Yes. Coffee, please. I want it after the meal.

No. 2

M: Speaking of play, do you know what kabuki is ( like ), Mami?

F: Sure. It's one of Japan's [ Japanese ] traditional forms of play.

The actors move very slowly on the stage.

M: That's right. And they speak ( a kind of ) old Japanese.

Thank you. kenta

Thank you! kenta
  

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No. 1 M: What kind of dressing would you like on your salad? F: Let me see ...

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  • 1 M: What kind of dressing would you like on your salad?
  • F: Let me see ...
  • French, please.
  • M: Certainly.
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No. 1

M: What kind of dressing would you like on your salad?

F: Let me see... French, please.

M: Certainly. Anything to drink?

F: Yes. Coffee, please. I want it after the meal / Could I have it after the meal, please? [My version is more polite; yours sounds a bit curt.]

No. 2

M: Speaking of plays, do you know what kabuki
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Hi, Mr Wordy. You helped me a lot. Thank you!

kenta

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