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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Jun 30 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

F: What kind of estate are you looking for?

M: We'd like ( it to have ) enough room for our kids.

F: Sure. I recommend this house. It has eight rooms and a

spacious garden [ yard ].

No. 2

M: Hi, Judy. I can't believe it! It's been ( is ) ten years.

F: Right. Little did I dream of meeting [ running into ] you here.

M: You haven't changed at all. How have you been?

Thank you! kenta
  

Top answer

" In the US, a stand-alone estate would comprise several acres, and there would be no question of room for the kids. If your concern is the size of the house , you would say so. ( I want an estate with a at least a fourteen-room house, and about ten acres of land.

— Avangi

  • " In the US, a stand-alone estate would comprise several acres, and there would be no question of room for the kids.
  • If your concern is the size of the house , you would say so.
  • ( I want an estate with a at least a fourteen-room house, and about ten acres of land.
  • " unless she thought you might be looking for a real one.
  • )
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Hi, Kenta,

The only thing I question is the term "estate."
In the US, a stand-alone estate would comprise several acres, and there would be no question of room for the kids.
If your concern is the size of the house, you would say so.
(I want an estate with a at least a fourteen-room house, and about ten acres of land.)

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