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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Jun 27 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Will it be necessary for me to change my cell [ mobile ] phone if I
want to watch movies on it?
F: Not at all. If you pay some surcharge and download an
application, you can do it.
No. 2
M: How many hours do you work ( in ) a week?
F: By contract, 30 hours a week. But I have to prepare for my
job, so it's considered 35 hours.
M: I see. Your job is to train newcomers [ freshmen ].
( Q. Can I say "freshmen" if there are some
women among them? )
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Will it be necessary for me to change my cell [ mobile ] phone if I
want to watch movies on it?
F: Not at all. If you pay some surcharge and download an
application, you can do it.
No. 2
M: How many hours do you work ( in ) a week?
F: By contract, 30 hours a week. But I have to prepare for my
job, so it's considered 35 hours.
M: I see. Your job is to train newcomers [ freshmen ].
( Q. Can I say "freshmen" if there are some
women among them? )
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
) No. 1 M: Will I need to get a new cell/mobile phone if I want to watch movies ? F: Not at all.
- ) No.
- 1 M: Will I need to get a new cell/mobile phone if I want to watch movies ?
- F: Not at all.
- If you pay a surcharge and download the application, you can use the one you have .
- No.
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(I've tried to make them flow better.)
No. 1
M: Will I need to get a new cell/mobile phone if I want to watch movies?
F: Not at all. If you pay a surcharge and download the application, you can use the one you have.
No. 2
M: How many hours a week do you work?
F: By contract, 30. But I have to pre
No. 1
M: Will I need to get a new cell/mobile phone if I want to watch movies?
F: Not at all. If you pay a surcharge and download the application, you can use the one you have.
No. 2
M: How many hours a week do you work?
F: By contract, 30. But I have to pre
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Hi, Micawber. Your comments are very helpful.
Thank you very much! kenta
Thank you very much! kenta
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