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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? (Jun. 27)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: I'd like a table for two, please.
F: Yes, sir. [ Certainly. ] Would you like a table by the window?
M: Great. We can enjoy a fine view.
F: Right. Come this way, please.
No. 2
M: I've been attracted to you for a long time [ since a long time ago ].
F: Me, too. It's fun being with you.
M: I feel the same way.
F: I hope we can [ will be able to ] get along with each other.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I'd like a table for two, please.
F: Yes, sir. [ Certainly. ] Would you like a table by the window?
M: Great. We can enjoy a fine view.
F: Right. Come this way, please.
No. 2
M: I've been attracted to you for a long time [ since a long time ago ].
F: Me, too. It's fun being with you.
M: I feel the same way.
F: I hope we can [ will be able to ] get along with each other.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
The ending to your #2 is decidedly odd, Kenta. I have offered a possible amendment. No.
- The ending to your #2 is decidedly odd, Kenta.
- I have offered a possible amendment.
- No.
- 1 M: I'd like a table for two, please.
- F: Yes, sir / Certainly .
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The ending to your #2 is decidedly odd, Kenta. I have offered a possible amendment.
No. 1
M: I'd like a table for two, please.
F: Yes, sir / Certainly. Would you like a table by the window?
M: Great! We can enjoy the view.
F: Come this way, please.
No. 2
M: I've been attracted to you for a lo
No. 1
M: I'd like a table for two, please.
F: Yes, sir / Certainly. Would you like a table by the window?
M: Great! We can enjoy the view.
F: Come this way, please.
No. 2
M: I've been attracted to you for a lo
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Thank you, Mister Micawber. You always give comments to me.You are very helpful. kenta
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