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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Jun 21 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: You should subscribe to Time if you are to learn current English.

F: But Time seems to be a little too difficult for me.

M: Then I recommend you ( should ) subscribe to Daily Yomiuri.

No. 2

M: Shall we go ( to ) see a movie this weekend [ for the weekend ] ?

F: Oh, you mean you ask me out for a date?

M: Well, that kind of thing. I've always hoped I could.

Thank you. kenta
  

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Hi, No. 1 M: You should subscribe to Time if you are to learn current English. if you are to learn sounds a bit like the obligation is imposed on you by someone else if you want to learn sounds more like the obligation is imposed on you by you yourself F: But Time seems to be a little too difficult for me.

— Clive

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: You should subscribe to Time if you are to learn current English.
  • if you are to learn sounds a bit like the obligation is imposed on you by someone else if you want to learn sounds more like the obligation is imposed on you by you yourself F: But Time seems to be a little too difficult for me.
  • M: Then I recommend you ( should ) subscribe to Daily Yomiuri.
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Hi,

No. 1

M: You should subscribe to Time if you are to learn current English.

if you are to learn sounds a bit like the obligation is imposed on you by someone else

if you want to learn sounds more like the obligation is imposed on you by you yourself

F: But Time seems to be a little too difficult for me.

M: Then I recommend yo
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Hi, Clive. You always helped me a lot.

Thank you. kenta
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