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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Jun 16 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?
No. 1
M: Wouldn't it be nice if we could spend all our time here in the
mountains?
F: You must be joking. You'd get bored of it immediately.
M: I don't think so. I'm thinking of living where there are no people.
No. 2
M: I'm concerned that we'll be late for our 4:00 train for LA.
F: Don't worry. This train will be arriving at 3:40.
M: Are you sure? I have an important meeting there.
I can never fail to join the meeting.
Thank you! kenta
No. 1
M: Wouldn't it be nice if we could spend all our time here in the
mountains?
F: You must be joking. You'd get bored of it immediately.
M: I don't think so. I'm thinking of living where there are no people.
No. 2
M: I'm concerned that we'll be late for our 4:00 train for LA.
F: Don't worry. This train will be arriving at 3:40.
M: Are you sure? I have an important meeting there.
I can never fail to join the meeting.
Thank you! kenta
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Kenta Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?
- Kenta Hello.
- I wrote two dialogues.
- Would you check them?
- No.
- 1 M: Wouldn't it be nice if we could spend all our time here in the mountains?
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KentaHello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?
No. 1
M: Wouldn't it be nice if we could spend all our time here in the
mountains?
F: You must be joking. You'd get bored of it immediately.
M: I don't think so. I think of living in an unpeopled area.
No. 2
M: I'm concerned that we'll b
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Hi Kenta
As a non-native speaker, I suggest:
M: Wouldn't it be nice if we could spend all our time here in the mountains? [OK]
F: You must be joking. You'd soon get bored of it.
M: I don't think so. I'm thinking of living where there are no people. [This sentence doesn't sound very natural to me. Perhaps: I don't think so. I've always
As a non-native speaker, I suggest:
M: Wouldn't it be nice if we could spend all our time here in the mountains? [OK]
F: You must be joking. You'd soon get bored of it.
M: I don't think so. I'm thinking of living where there are no people. [This sentence doesn't sound very natural to me. Perhaps: I don't think so. I've always
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