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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( July 7 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: You know? 79,000 university students in Japan have stayed at
school so that they can a better chance of finding a job.
F: Yeah. But I don't know why they are still at school.
M: In Japan, big companies usually recruit newcomers among new
grads.
No. 2
M: Don't be so depressed. Anyone can make a mistake.
F: I know. But I can't think positive.
M: I know how you feel. But time cures. Cheer up [ Come on ]!
F: Thank you. You are sweet.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: You know? 79,000 university students in Japan have stayed at
school so that they can a better chance of finding a job.
F: Yeah. But I don't know why they are still at school.
M: In Japan, big companies usually recruit newcomers among new
grads.
No. 2
M: Don't be so depressed. Anyone can make a mistake.
F: I know. But I can't think positive.
M: I know how you feel. But time cures. Cheer up [ Come on ]!
F: Thank you. You are sweet.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
#1 * Did you know that 79,000 students in Japan have continued their education onto the university level so they can have a better chance of finding a job? * Yes, but I don't know why they are still in school. * Because big companies in Japan usually hire new employees from new university graduates.
- #1 * Did you know that 79,000 students in Japan have continued their education onto the university level so they can have a better chance of finding a job?
- * Yes, but I don't know why they are still in school.
- * Because big companies in Japan usually hire new employees from new university graduates.
- #2 * (OK) * (OK) * I know how you feel, but time heals all wounds.
- So cheer up.
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#1
* Did you know that 79,000 students in Japan have continued their education onto the university level so they can have a better chance of finding a job?
* Yes, but I don't know why they are still in school.
* Because big companies in Japan usually hire new employees from new university graduates.
#2
* (OK)
* (OK)
* I know how you feel, but time heals a
* Did you know that 79,000 students in Japan have continued their education onto the university level so they can have a better chance of finding a job?
* Yes, but I don't know why they are still in school.
* Because big companies in Japan usually hire new employees from new university graduates.
#2
* (OK)
* (OK)
* I know how you feel, but time heals a
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