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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( July 31 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Hi, Jesica. I heard you're in ( a ) hosptal, but you look fine.
F: Sorry for making you worry. Dr. Kimura saved my life [ He is my life
saver ].
M: Great! You had [ underwent ] a difficult operation, so please take
care of yourself.
No. 2
M: A helicopter on its way to rescue a mountain climber crashed into
the mountain in Chiba Prefecture.
F: I watched the news on TV. What's the cause of the accident?
M: It hasn't been found [ idenfied ] yet.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Hi, Jesica. I heard you're in ( a ) hosptal, but you look fine.
F: Sorry for making you worry. Dr. Kimura saved my life [ He is my life
saver ].
M: Great! You had [ underwent ] a difficult operation, so please take
care of yourself.
No. 2
M: A helicopter on its way to rescue a mountain climber crashed into
the mountain in Chiba Prefecture.
F: I watched the news on TV. What's the cause of the accident?
M: It hasn't been found [ idenfied ] yet.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: Hi, Jesica. I heard you were in ( a ) hosptal, but you look fine.
- Hi, No.
- 1 M: Hi, Jesica.
- I heard you were in ( a ) hosptal, but you look fine.
- F: Sorry for making you worry.
- Dr.
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Hi,
No. 1
M: Hi, Jesica. I heard you were in( a ) hosptal, but you look fine.
F: Sorry for making you worry. Dr. Kimura saved my life[ He is my life
saver ].
M: Great! You had[ underwent ] a serious difficult operation, so please take
care of yourself.
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No. 1
M: Hi, Jesica. I heard you were in
F: Sorry for making you worry. Dr. Kimura saved my life
M: Great! You had
care of yourself.
N
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Let me confuse you, Kenta:
No. 1
M: Hi, Jessica. I heard you were in (the) hospital, but you look fine.
F: Sorry for worrying you. Dr Kimura saved my life!
M: He said (that) it was a difficult operation. I'm glad you're OK.
No. 2
M: A helicopter trying to rescue a hik
No. 1
M: Hi, Jessica. I heard you were in (the) hospital, but you look fine.
F: Sorry for worrying you. Dr Kimura saved my life!
M: He said (that) it was a difficult operation. I'm glad you're OK.
No. 2
M: A helicopter trying to rescue a hik
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Thank you for you both. I'm very glad to recieve your comments.
Thank you very much. kenta
Thank you very much. kenta
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