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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( July 3 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No.1
M: Have you got [ Do you have ] a quarter I can borrow, Ben?
F: OK. Do you want to make a ( telephone ) call?
M: Yes. I want to get [ call ] a cab.
F: Will you share a taxi with me?
No. 2
M: When you testify, be sure to answer the questions as briefly
as possible.
F: OK. We don't want to give them any more information than we have to [ necessary ].
M: Right. This is your first time to appear in court [ stand in a courtroom ]. Take it easy.
Thank you. kenta
No.1
M: Have you got [ Do you have ] a quarter I can borrow, Ben?
F: OK. Do you want to make a ( telephone ) call?
M: Yes. I want to get [ call ] a cab.
F: Will you share a taxi with me?
No. 2
M: When you testify, be sure to answer the questions as briefly
as possible.
F: OK. We don't want to give them any more information than we have to [ necessary ].
M: Right. This is your first time to appear in court [ stand in a courtroom ]. Take it easy.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi I have made some changes. Hope it helps. 1 M: Have you got [ Do you have ] a quarter to lend me , Ben?
- Hi I have made some changes.
- Hope it helps.
- 1 M: Have you got [ Do you have ] a quarter to lend me , Ben?
- F: OK.
- Do you want to make a ( telephone ) call?
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Hi
I have made some changes. Hope it helps.
No.1
M: Have you got [ Do you have ] a quarter to lend me, Ben?
F: OK. Do you want to make a ( telephone ) call?
M: Yes. I want to get [ call ] a cab.
F: Will you share a taxi with me?
I have made some changes. Hope it helps.
No.1
M: Have you got [ Do you have ] a quarter to lend me, Ben?
F: OK. Do you want to make a ( telephone ) call?
M: Yes. I want to get [ call ] a cab.
F: Will you share a taxi with me?
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Hi
I'm afraid I missed the word 'time' after 'first' in the last sentence in the second conversation.
I am sorry for that.
I'm afraid I missed the word 'time' after 'first' in the last sentence in the second conversation.
I am sorry for that.
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