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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (July. 28)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: My client said he wanted to meet us before the end of the [ this ] month.

When will it be convenient ( for you )?

F: Any day of this week is fine with me. But John is going to go on a

business trip from tomorrow. So how about sometime next week.

No. 2

M: Are you having [ Are you going to have ] lunch in the cafeteria today?

F: No. I brought my lunch [ lunchbox ] from home.

M: Too bad. I wanted to go to that new Spanish restaurant with you.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: My client said he wanted to meet us before the end of the [ this ] month. When will it be convenient ( for you )?

— Mr Wordy

  • No.
  • 1 M: My client said he wanted to meet us before the end of the [ this ] month.
  • When will it be convenient ( for you )?
  • F: Any day of ["of" is not actually wrong, but I would normally omit it] this week is fine with me.
  • But [I'd write this as once sentence: "...
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No. 1

M: My client said he wanted to meet us before the end of the [ this ] month.

When will it be convenient ( for you )?

F: Any day of ["of" is not actually wrong, but I would normally omit it] this week is fine with me. But [I'd write this as once sentence: "... fine with me, but ...] John is going to go on a business trip [not wrong, but I would usuall
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Thank you, again, Mr Wordy.

Is No. 2 OK? If so, I'd be happyEmotion: smile
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KentaIs No. 2 OK?

Yes ... I didn't see any problems with No. 2, hence no comments. Sorry that wan't clear.
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