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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( July 25 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: I'm going to buy a new cell phone. Do you know of any good
communication company?
( Q. Is 'of' necessary? )
F: I recommend g-phone. You can get a lot of data through it.
M: I know it's very good, it's a little too expensive, though.
No. 2
M: I'd like to have these pants cleaned as soon as possible.
F: Certainly. I can have them ready in a few hours. Oh, this
belt loop is torn.
M: If you could, sew it up, please.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I'm going to buy a new cell phone. Do you know of any good
communication company?
( Q. Is 'of' necessary? )
F: I recommend g-phone. You can get a lot of data through it.
M: I know it's very good, it's a little too expensive, though.
No. 2
M: I'd like to have these pants cleaned as soon as possible.
F: Certainly. I can have them ready in a few hours. Oh, this
belt loop is torn.
M: If you could, sew it up, please.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
In te frst example, "of" isn't necessary in a dialogue. The second dialogue is good as well, except that you may consider placing a break between the statemen of "F" by introducing the person a second time: F: Certainly. I can have them ready in a few hours.
- In te frst example, "of" isn't necessary in a dialogue.
- The second dialogue is good as well, except that you may consider placing a break between the statemen of "F" by introducing the person a second time: F: Certainly.
- I can have them ready in a few hours.
- F: Oh, this belt loop is torn.
- By breaking the conversation, it appears that the persona is revising the work before making the statement.
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In te frst example, "of" isn't necessary in a dialogue.
The second dialogue is good as well, except that you may consider placing a break between the statemen of "F" by introducing the person a second time:
F: Certainly. I can have them ready in a few hours.
F: Oh, this belt loop is torn.
By breaking the conversation, it appears that the persona is revising th
The second dialogue is good as well, except that you may consider placing a break between the statemen of "F" by introducing the person a second time:
F: Certainly. I can have them ready in a few hours.
F: Oh, this belt loop is torn.
By breaking the conversation, it appears that the persona is revising th
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Hi, Doleary. Nice to meet you.
Your comment is helpful. Thank you very much.
kenta
Your comment is helpful. Thank you very much.
kenta
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