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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( July 19 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1 at the car dealer
M: You want 3,500 dollars for this car?
F: Yes, but I've been waiting until now, so I'm open to your
suggestion.
M: If you agree, I'll pay 3,000 by cash.
No. 2
M: How was your camping trip, Junko?
F: It should [ would ] have been great, but I came down with
a flu that morning.
M: Oh, that's too bad because you really wanted to go.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1 at the car dealer
M: You want 3,500 dollars for this car?
F: Yes, but I've been waiting until now, so I'm open to your
suggestion.
M: If you agree, I'll pay 3,000 by cash.
No. 2
M: How was your camping trip, Junko?
F: It should [ would ] have been great, but I came down with
a flu that morning.
M: Oh, that's too bad because you really wanted to go.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
No. 1 at the car dealer-- Yours is not realistically structured, Kenta. M: You want 3500 dollars for this car?
- No.
- 1 at the car dealer-- Yours is not realistically structured, Kenta.
- M: You want 3500 dollars for this car?
- I'll give you $3000 cash.
- F: Well, let me ask the manager.
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No. 1 at the car dealer-- Yours is not realistically structured, Kenta.
M: You want 3500 dollars for this car? I'll give you $3000 cash.
F: Well, let me ask the manager.
No. 2
M: How was your camping trip, Junko?
F: Well, it would have been great, but I came down with the flu that morning, so I didn't go
M: You want 3500 dollars for this car? I'll give you $3000 cash.
F: Well, let me ask the manager.
No. 2
M: How was your camping trip, Junko?
F: Well, it would have been great, but I came down with the flu that morning, so I didn't go
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