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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( July 14 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
F: Umm, I can't open the lid of this honey bottle.
M: That happens. I'll try it, or how about putting maple syrup on
your bread instead. I'm sure it matches bread.
F: OK. Actually, I'd rather maple syrup than honey.
No. 2
M: Your package should arrive on the third or the fourth.
F: But before, you promised it would be here on the first.
M: I'm sorry. We've just merged with another company and our
new system isn't working well.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
F: Umm, I can't open the lid of this honey bottle.
M: That happens. I'll try it, or how about putting maple syrup on
your bread instead. I'm sure it matches bread.
F: OK. Actually, I'd rather maple syrup than honey.
No. 2
M: Your package should arrive on the third or the fourth.
F: But before, you promised it would be here on the first.
M: I'm sorry. We've just merged with another company and our
new system isn't working well.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
No. 1 F: Umm, I can't open the top of this honey bottle. [ or lid of a jar ] M: That happens.
- No.
- 1 F: Umm, I can't open the top of this honey bottle.
- [ or lid of a jar ] M: That happens.
- Let me try.
- Or how about putting maple syrup on your bread instead ?
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No. 1
F: Umm, I can't open the top of this honey bottle. [or lid of a jar]
M: That happens. Let me try. Or how about putting maple syrup on your bread instead? I'm sure that goes with bread.
F: OK. Actually, I'd rather have maple syrup than honey.
No. 2
M: Your package should arrive on the thir
F: Umm, I can't open the top of this honey bottle. [or lid of a jar]
M: That happens. Let me try. Or how about putting maple syrup on your bread instead? I'm sure that goes with bread.
F: OK. Actually, I'd rather have maple syrup than honey.
No. 2
M: Your package should arrive on the thir
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