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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (July. 13)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

: Do you want cream or sugar in your coffee?

F: Just cream, if you don't mind.

M: Oops. sorry, I shouldn't have asked. I'm out of sugar.

M: Well, I guess we'll take [ have ] a coffee break unless there's

some work to do now.

F: No. I'd like you to type ( up ) these memos. Let's have a break

after that. If you like, let's do it over a cup of coffee.
  

Top answer

Hi Kenta, The grammar is okay. " (good thing you want only cream and not sugar. M: Oops!

  • Hi Kenta, The grammar is okay.
  • " (good thing you want only cream and not sugar.
  • M: Oops!
  • That's good.
  • Because I forgot that out of sugar anyway!
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Hi Kenta,

The grammar is okay. With the first one, it would be a bit more natural - since the person only wants cream and NOT sugar - to say something like "good thing!" (good thing you want only cream and not sugar.

M: Oops! That's good. Because I forgot that out of sugar anyway!

With the second, again, the grammar is okay, but it's not very natural business chat.
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Thank you, Grammar Geek. Your comment is very helpful!

kenta

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