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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (July. 11)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

M is a teacher and F is one of the students in the classroom.

No. 1

M: Hey, be quiet in class [ during the class ]. It's the most important part!

F: I'm sorry. Would you explain it to me again?

M: You're hopeless. Listen to me carefully this time, right?

F: Thank you, I will.

No. 2

M: Good morning. Let's begin today's lesson. Open your textbook

to page 83.

F: Well... we've already finished that page.

M: Oh, sorry. Turn to page 85. I should be more careful.

Thank you! kenta
  

Top answer

Not very natural this time, Kenta. No. 1 M: Please pay attention in class, Aya.

  • Not very natural this time, Kenta.
  • No.
  • 1 M: Please pay attention in class, Aya.
  • F: I'm sorry.
  • Would you explain it again ?
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2 Answers
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Not very natural this time, Kenta.

No. 1

M: Please pay attention in class, Aya.

F: I'm sorry. Would you explain it again?

M: Please listen this time, then.

F: OK. Sorry.

No. 2

M: Good morning, class. Let's begin today's lesson. Open your textbooks to page 83.

F: I th
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Thank you, Mister Micawber. Your comment is very helpful!

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