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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (Jan.5)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: You look depressed [ down ], Miki. Something wrong?

F: Not with me but ( with ) my grandma. She's getting senile.

She can't recognize even [ even recognize ] my own family ( members ).

M: Too bad. I don't know what to say.

No. 2

M: Sorry to keep you waiting. What seems to be the matter?

F: I have a terrible soar throat.

M: I see. Have you got pains anywhere else?

F: No, but I have a runny nose.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

my correction ; No. 1 M: You look depressed , Miki. Is Something wrong?

— SunnyShiny

  • my correction ; No.
  • 1 M: You look depressed , Miki.
  • Is Something wrong?
  • (or Is anything wrong with you?
  • ) F: Not with me but ( with ) my grandma.
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my correction ;

No. 1

M: You look depressed , Miki. Is Something wrong? (or Is anything wrong with you? Is everything fine?)

F: Not with me but ( with ) my grandma. She's getting senile.

She can't recognize anyone even my own family ( close reletives ).

M: Too bad. I don't know what to say.

No. 2

M: Sorry to keep you waiting. Wh
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Nice to meet you, SunnyShiny.

I'm very glad to receive your comment.

I hope you'll give me good comments from now on.

kenta
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you are welcome.. I hope i could help you.
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F: I have a terrible sore throat.

(rest looks OK to me)
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