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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (Jan.27)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

M: Hi, Yuka. Long time no see! How have you been?

F: Yes, I was involved in volunteer work in Tokyo.

M: Is that so? How long did you stay there?

F: I stayed there for about a month and help earthquake victims [ sufferers] .

No. 2

M: I went to a Vietnamese restaurant the other day. It was a little

expensive but the food was terrific [ fantastic / excellent ]!

F: Really? I've never had Vietnamese food. What's it like?

M: Then let's go there this Saturday, shall we?

Thank you!
  

Top answer

Hi again, I'm going to make them sound natural. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

— Clive

  • Hi again, I'm going to make them sound natural.
  • I wrote two dialogues.
  • Would you check them?
  • No.
  • 1 M: Hi, Yuka.
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Hi again,
I'm going to make them sound natural.

I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

M: Hi, Yuka. Long time no see! How have you been?

F: Yes, I was involved in volunteer work in Tokyo. You might also say 'I was doing . .
Also, consider the Present Perfect ie 'I've been involved in . . / been doing . . .'

M: Is t
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Thank you very much, Clive. You always help me. Please continue to give me a comment.

kenta
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