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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Jan.25 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

F: Where in the world have you been?

M: I lost my way en route here. I didn't know where I was.

F: I thought [ was convinced ] you'd got caught in traffic or decided

not to come.

No. 2

M: Would you like to go and see a movie [ go to the movies ]?

F: Sounds good. When?

M: How about next Saturday? I hear "Avatar" is an amazing one.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

' anyway please wait for other answers too. All other feels good to me.

  • ' anyway please wait for other answers too.
  • All other feels good to me.
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Better to use 'I heard.............' anyway please wait for other answers too. All other feels good to me.
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Hi, Toms. Thank you for your advice!

kenta
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Hi,

No. 1

F: Where in the world have you been?

M: I lost my way en route here. / I got lost on the way here.

I didn't know where I was.

F: I thought [ was convinced ] you'd got caught / stuck in traffic or decided

not to come.

No. 2

M: Would you like to go and see a movie [ go to the movies ]? (both are ok)
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Thank you, Clive. You always help me a lot!

kenta

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