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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (Jan.2)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: Hi. My name is Michael McCartney. I've ( got ) an appointment

with Ms. Barnes.

F: She'll be right with you as soon as the meeting is over.

Would you care for some coffee while you wait?

No. 2

M: How fascinating that exhibition was!

F: Yeah, I'm not interested in art, but I can't help saying

[ I have to say ] I was impressed.

M: I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi Kenta Your dialogues are OK. I've added a few suggestions inside the quote. Kenta Hello.

— Yankee

  • Hi Kenta Your dialogues are OK.
  • I've added a few suggestions inside the quote.
  • Kenta Hello.
  • I wrote two dialogues.
  • Will you correct them?
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Hi Kenta

Your dialogues are OK. I've added a few suggestions inside the quote.
KentaHello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: Hi. My name is Michael McCartney. I've got (OR: I have) an appointment

with Ms. Barnes.

F: She'll be right with you
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Hi Kenta,

No. 1

M: Hi. My name is Michael McCartney. I've ( got ) / I have an appointment

with Ms. Barnes.

F: Sorry, she's in a meeting. She'll be right with you as soon as it's over.

Would you care for some coffee while you wait?

No. 2

M: How fascinating that exhibition was!

F: Yeah, I'm n
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Thank you. You helped me a lot.

kenta
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