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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Feb.6 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: How about sitting down and have a drink with me?
F: I'd love that [ it ], but I'm still on duty [ still working ].
M: Aw, come on! All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!
No. 2
M: How should I get an outline on this ( phone )?
F: Just pick up the receiver and press [ push ] zero.
M: Ah! I hear [ There's ] a dial tone. Thanks.
F: No problem. But don't talk too long.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: How about sitting down and have a drink with me?
F: I'd love that [ it ], but I'm still on duty [ still working ].
M: Aw, come on! All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!
No. 2
M: How should I get an outline on this ( phone )?
F: Just pick up the receiver and press [ push ] zero.
M: Ah! I hear [ There's ] a dial tone. Thanks.
F: No problem. But don't talk too long.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi No. 1 M: How about sitting down and have having a drink with me? F: I'd love to that [ it ] , but I'm still on duty [ still working ].
- Hi No.
- 1 M: How about sitting down and have having a drink with me?
- F: I'd love to that [ it ] , but I'm still on duty [ still working ].
- M: Aw, come on!
- All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy!
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No. 1
M: How about sitting down andhave having a drink with me?
F: I'd love tothat [ it ], but I'm still on duty [ still working ].
M: Aw, come on! All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
No. 1
M: How about sitting down and
F: I'd love to
M: Aw, come on! All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
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