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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
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Would you correct my English? (Feb.24)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?
No. 1
M: What do you think he was trying to express with his novel?
F: I don't come up with any comments about it. It's too abstract.
M: Really? I was impressed with it very much.
No. 2
F: It's time we washed all the windows around the house.
M: Can't you wait until this weekend? I have a lot ( of things ) to do.
F: Well... it's OK, but keep in mind ( that ) you say you will do it.
Thank you! kenta
No. 1
M: What do you think he was trying to express with his novel?
F: I don't come up with any comments about it. It's too abstract.
M: Really? I was impressed with it very much.
No. 2
F: It's time we washed all the windows around the house.
M: Can't you wait until this weekend? I have a lot ( of things ) to do.
F: Well... it's OK, but keep in mind ( that ) you say you will do it.
Thank you! kenta
Top answer
Hi Kenta, No. 1 M: What do you think he was trying to express in/with his novel? F: I don't didn't / can't come up with any comments about it.
- Hi Kenta, No.
- 1 M: What do you think he was trying to express in/with his novel?
- F: I don't didn't / can't come up with any comments about it.
- It's too abstract.
- M: Really?
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Hi Kenta,
No. 1
M: What do you think he was trying to express in/with his novel?
F: Idon't didn't / can't come up with any comments about it. It's too abstract.
M: Really? I was impressed with it very much.
No. 2
F: It's time we washed all the windows around the house.
M: Can't you wait until this weekend? I
No. 1
M: What do you think he was trying to express in/with his novel?
F: I
M: Really? I was impressed with it very much.
No. 2
F: It's time we washed all the windows around the house.
M: Can't you wait until this weekend? I
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KentaNo. 1
M: What do you think he was trying to express with his novel? Some might prefer "in his novel, but I think "with" is fine.
F: I don't come up with any comments about it. It's too abstract. "I don't come up with" may be a bit casual, but perhaps that's what you want.
M: Really? I was impressed with it very
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