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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Feb. 21 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: What kind of car do you have?

F: It's 4WD, because we have a lot of snow ( around ) here.

M: I'm thinking of buying a new car. Let me have [ take ] a look at it.

F: Sure. Come ( over ) to my house this evening.

No. 2

M: You're a university student, aren't you? What year [ grade ] are you in?

F: I'm a sophomore.

M: What are your plans after graduation?

F: I want to teach English at senior high school.

Thank you. kenta
  

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No. 1 M: What kind of car do you have? F: It's a 4WD, because we have a lot of snow ( around ) here.

  • No.
  • 1 M: What kind of car do you have?
  • F: It's a 4WD, because we have a lot of snow ( around ) here.
  • M: I'm thinking of buying a new car.
  • Could I have [ take ] a look at it ?
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No. 1

M: What kind of car do you have?

F: It's a 4WD, because we have a lot of snow ( around ) here.

M: I'm thinking of buying a new car. Could I have [ take ] a look at it?

F: Sure. Come ( over ) to my house this evening.

No. 2

M: You're a university student, aren't you? What year?

F: I'm a sophomore.
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No. 1

M: What kind of car do you have?

F: It's (a) four-wheel drive, because we have a lot of snow ( around ) here. -- Only in very abbreviated English would you write "4WD" here.

M: I'm thinking of buying a new car. Let me have [ take ] a look at it.

F: Sure. Come ( over ) to my house this evening.

No. 2

M: You're a university student,
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Only in very abbreviated English would you write "4WD" here.
You can't get much more abbreviated than a short dialogue. It's fine here, Kenta.

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Mister Micawber
Only in very abbreviated English would you write "4WD" here.


You can't get much more abbreviated than a short dialogue. It's fine here, Kenta.



The fact that it's a short dialogue is irrelevant to the acceptability of such abbrevations.

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No, Mr Wordy-- it is pronounced 'four double-yu dee' and is a common term for the vehicle.
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Mister Micawber
No, Mr Wordy-- it is pronounced 'four double-yu dee' and is a common term for the vehicle.


In your parlance, perhaps. I am not aware that this pronunciation is in general use in conversational British English. The written abbreviation is certainly used, but looks slightly odd in the context of this dialogue unless one assumes
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Thank you, everybody. I'm very glad to have a lot of comments.

You all helped me a lot.

kenta

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