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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Dec.21 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: There are too many mistakes in [ about ] this report.

It needs to be done [ needs doing ] again.

F: Give me a break! I agree it's not perfect, but I sat up late

all night writing this.

No. 2

M: Have you seen my calulator? I have to do ( my ) math homework.

F: No. When did you last use it [ use it last ]?

M: A couple of [ A few ] days ago. I can't do it in my head.

F: I have a Japanese abacus. How about it?

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi, No. 1 M: There are too many mistakes in [ about ] this report. It needs to be done [ needs doing ] again.

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: There are too many mistakes in [ about ] this report.
  • It needs to be done [ needs doing ] again.
  • F: Give me a break!
  • I agree it's not perfect, but I sat up late all night writing this.
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Hi,

No. 1

M: There are too many mistakes in [ about ] this report.

It needs to be done [ needs doing ] again.

F: Give me a break! I agree it's not perfect, but I sat up late

all night writing this.

No. 2

M: Have you seen my calculator? I have to do my math homework.

F: No. When did you last use it [ u
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Hi, Clive. You always help me. And thank you for your warm comments.

kenta

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