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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Dec.20 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: How much is this ( dress ) shirt?
F: Its 30 dollars, but I can discount 10 percent off if you buy
one of these ties.
M: Oh, that's a good deal.
No. 2
M: Oh, no! It's already 6:30. I have to hurry.
F: You don't have to. Didn't I tell you the clock on the table
was 10 minutes fast?
M: Oh, really? That's good. I thought I'd miss my train.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: How much is this ( dress ) shirt?
F: Its 30 dollars, but I can discount 10 percent off if you buy
one of these ties.
M: Oh, that's a good deal.
No. 2
M: Oh, no! It's already 6:30. I have to hurry.
F: You don't have to. Didn't I tell you the clock on the table
was 10 minutes fast?
M: Oh, really? That's good. I thought I'd miss my train.
Thank you. kenta
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No. 1
Hi,
M: How much is this ( dress ) shirt , please?
'Please' is very, very commonly used in English. You might be surprised by how much.
F: It's 30 dollars, but I can discount it (by) 10 percent off if you buy
one of these ties.
M: Oh, that's a good deal.
No. 2
M: Oh,
Hi,
M: How much is this (
'Please' is very, very commonly used in English. You might be surprised by how much.
F: It's 30 dollars, but I can discount it (by) 10 percent
one of these ties.
M: Oh, that's a good deal.
No. 2
M: Oh,
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