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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? (Dec 6 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: Would you shut the window?
F: Sure. It's not so cold, but do you feel cold?
M: No. I have asthma, so cool wind at night isn't good for me.
F: I see.
No. 2
M: The best way to slim down is to exercise and eat properly.
F: Sure. And one more thing.
M: I know what you're going to say. To have a positive attitude
toward everything. Right?
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Would you shut the window?
F: Sure. It's not so cold, but do you feel cold?
M: No. I have asthma, so cool wind at night isn't good for me.
F: I see.
No. 2
M: The best way to slim down is to exercise and eat properly.
F: Sure. And one more thing.
M: I know what you're going to say. To have a positive attitude
toward everything. Right?
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Kenta Hi, I realized it's an ordinary conversation, so I tried to keep as much ideas as I could. Overall, your grammar is almost perfect. Keep it up!
- Kenta Hi, I realized it's an ordinary conversation, so I tried to keep as much ideas as I could.
- Overall, your grammar is almost perfect.
- Keep it up!
- No.
- 1 M: Would you mind shutting ( or: closing ) the window, please ?
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KentaHi,
I realized it's an ordinary conversation, so I tried to keep as much ideas as I could.
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