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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? (Aug.9)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
At a restaurant
M: Mmm, this strawberry shortcake looks delicious!
F: You must be kidding! Don't you remember [ Did you forget ] you're on diet?
( Q. Can I say "Do you forget ..."?)
M: Fair enough. I'll just have [ get ] ( a ) coffee.
No. 2
M: What should we move next? How about the bookshelf?
F: Good idea. Let's put it on this side.
M: You mean the side across from the table? I don't agree ( to it ).
It should be ( put ) [ should go ] in the corner.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
At a restaurant
M: Mmm, this strawberry shortcake looks delicious!
F: You must be kidding! Don't you remember [ Did you forget ] you're on diet?
( Q. Can I say "Do you forget ..."?)
M: Fair enough. I'll just have [ get ] ( a ) coffee.
No. 2
M: What should we move next? How about the bookshelf?
F: Good idea. Let's put it on this side.
M: You mean the side across from the table? I don't agree ( to it ).
It should be ( put ) [ should go ] in the corner.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
No. 1 At a restaurant . [missing period] M: Mmm, this strawberry shortcake looks delicious!
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- 1 At a restaurant .
- [missing period] M: Mmm, this strawberry shortcake looks delicious!
- F: You must be kidding!
- Don't you remember [ Did you forget ] you're on a diet?
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No. 1
At a restaurant. [missing period]
M: Mmm, this strawberry shortcake looks delicious!
F: You must be kidding! Don't you remember [ Did you forget ] you're on a diet?
( Q. Can I say "Do you forget ..."? Not impossible, but not very natural to me.)
M: Fair enough. I'll just have [ get ] ( a ) coffee
At a restaurant. [missing period]
M: Mmm, this strawberry shortcake looks delicious!
F: You must be kidding! Don't you remember [ Did you forget ] you're on a diet?
( Q. Can I say "Do you forget ..."? Not impossible, but not very natural to me.)
M: Fair enough. I'll just have [ get ] ( a ) coffee
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