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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
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Would you correct my English? (Aug.26)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: May I help you, ma'am?
F: Yes. I'd like this watch. Would you gift-wrap [ wrap it as a gift ] it, please?
M: Sure. A box is extra. What color ribbon would you prefer [ like ] to
wrap this?
No. 2
M: May I introduce myself?
F: You must be Kenta. I've heard a lot about you.
M: Oh, from Yoko? Good things, I hope.
F: Of course. I'm Takako Yamada of Sunrise Company.
( Q. Is "My name is ..." better? )
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: May I help you, ma'am?
F: Yes. I'd like this watch. Would you gift-wrap [ wrap it as a gift ] it, please?
M: Sure. A box is extra. What color ribbon would you prefer [ like ] to
wrap this?
No. 2
M: May I introduce myself?
F: You must be Kenta. I've heard a lot about you.
M: Oh, from Yoko? Good things, I hope.
F: Of course. I'm Takako Yamada of Sunrise Company.
( Q. Is "My name is ..." better? )
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Kenta Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
- Kenta Hello.
- I wrote two dialogues.
- Will you correct them?
- No.
- 1 M: May I help you, ma'am?
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KentaHello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: May I help you, ma'am?
F: Yes. I'd like this watch. Would you gift-wrap [ wrap it as a gift ] it, please? gift-wrap is more common, but the other is fine.
M: Sure. A box is extra. What color ribbon would you prefer [ like ]to
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M: What color ribbon would you like? (In conversation, it's not necessary and perhaps even "strange" to repeat everything. If you wanted to, however, you might say: What color ribbon do you prefer that it be wrapped with?/What color ribbon would you like it to be wrapped with?) F:You must be Kenta. I've heard a lot about you. M: Oh, really? From whom? F: From Yoko. M: I hope she said g
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