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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Aug 24 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: I hear ( that ) your hobby is knitting.

F: Right. Besides it, I like reading and traveling.

M: I love reading and traveling, too. I'm glad we have hobbies

in common. Where have you been recently?

No. 2

M: He's really making me angry. I can't stand the sight of him.

F: What happened? I am just not used to seeing you so angry.

M: He covered up a [ his ] mistake again!

F: Really? He may be fired, then.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: I 've hear ( that ) your hobby is knitting. F: Right.

— Imantaghavi

  • No.
  • 1 M: I 've hear ( that ) your hobby is knitting.
  • F: Right.
  • Besides it (in addition/except from that) , I like reading and trave l ling.
  • M: I love reading and trave l ling, too.
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No. 1

M: I've hear ( that ) your hobby is knitting.

F: Right. Besides it(in addition/except from that), I like reading and travelling.

M: I love reading and travelling, too. I'm glad we have hobbies

in c
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Actually, Kenta, your sentences are correct. On #1 in the first sentence, it can be either "I hear" or "I've heard." The only other suggestion I have for any change would be in the second sentence of #1; you might want to consider replacing the word "it" with what it is referring to, such as "knitting," so that the sentence re
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It would actually be either "I hear" or "I've heard," but not "I've hear."
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Ooooops.

That is atypo in the first sentence in green.

I've heard.

OR you can say I heard.

Regards
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Hi, everyone. you all gave me good comments.

Thank you very much. kenta
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