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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (Apr.25)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: I didn't notice you ( are ) studying. Is this radio bothering you?

F: Just a little. If possible, could you turn it down?

M: OK. I'll use my headset.

No. 2

M: ( This is ) Brilliant Hotel. ( How ) May I help you?

F: Hi. I'd like ( to reserve ) a single room for this Friday.

Do you have any vacancies?

M: We certainly do.

Thank you. kenta
  

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No problems that I can see! [Y]

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No problems that I can see! [Y]
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Hi

My suggestions:

No. 1

M: I didn't notice you ( are ) studying. Is this the radio bothering you?

F: Just a little. If possible, could you turn it down, please?

M: OK. I'll use my headset.
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Oops

I don't know why, but none of the formatting is showing on me previous post.

M: I didn't notice you ( are ) studying. Is the radio bothering you?

F: Just a little. Could you turn it down (a bit), please?

M: OK. I'll use my headset.
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Thank you both. Your comments are very helpful!

kenta

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