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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Apr. 9 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: Are you going to make it to the meeting on Tuesday morning?
F: No. I won't be back till Wednesday.
M: I see. I'll attend it instead of you, then.
No. 2
M: We have to find a new place for our club meeting.
F: Why can't we rent the room we've been using?
M: It's closing at the end of this month.
F: That's a shame. OK. We can use my house for the time being.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Are you going to make it to the meeting on Tuesday morning?
F: No. I won't be back till Wednesday.
M: I see. I'll attend it instead of you, then.
No. 2
M: We have to find a new place for our club meeting.
F: Why can't we rent the room we've been using?
M: It's closing at the end of this month.
F: That's a shame. OK. We can use my house for the time being.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
They both look fine. The 'it' after attend is optional, the sentence would make sense without it. I might change the OK for 'never mind'.
- They both look fine.
- The 'it' after attend is optional, the sentence would make sense without it.
- I might change the OK for 'never mind'.
- It's not wrong, just a personal choice which sounds more natural to me.
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They both look fine.
The 'it' after attend is optional, the sentence would make sense without it.
I might change the OK for 'never mind'. It's not wrong, just a personal choice which sounds more natural to me.
The 'it' after attend is optional, the sentence would make sense without it.
I might change the OK for 'never mind'. It's not wrong, just a personal choice which sounds more natural to me.
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