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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English?
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you chec them?
No. 1
M: The waist of these pants is too tight and the inseam is way too short.
F: Well, would you care to try a larger one on [try on a larger one] ?
M: Yes, then I'd like pants with cuffs, too.
No. 2
F: Where would you like to try for dinner tonight?
M: I hear [heard] there's a new Chinese place that just opened
near the station.
F: Great, then what are we waiting for?
Thank you!
No. 1
M: The waist of these pants is too tight and the inseam is way too short.
F: Well, would you care to try a larger one on [try on a larger one] ?
M: Yes, then I'd like pants with cuffs, too.
No. 2
F: Where would you like to try for dinner tonight?
M: I hear [heard] there's a new Chinese place that just opened
near the station.
F: Great, then what are we waiting for?
Thank you!
Top answer
Hi Kenta Here are my suggestions: No. 1 M: These pants are too tight in the waist , and the inseam is way too short. F: Well, would you like to try on a larger pair ?
- Hi Kenta Here are my suggestions: No.
- 1 M: These pants are too tight in the waist , and the inseam is way too short.
- F: Well, would you like to try on a larger pair ?
- M: Yes, and I'd like pants with cuffs, too.
- In No.
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Hi Kenta
Here are my suggestions:
No. 1
M: These pants are too tight in the waist, and the inseam is way too short.
F: Well, would you like to try on a larger pair?
M: Yes, and I'd like pants with cuffs, too.
In No. 2, I'd suggest using "hear", but you can use either "hear" or "heard".
Here are my suggestions:
No. 1
M: These pants are too tight in the waist, and the inseam is way too short.
F: Well, would you like to try on a larger pair?
M: Yes, and I'd like pants with cuffs, too.
In No. 2, I'd suggest using "hear", but you can use either "hear" or "heard".
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