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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
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I wrote two dialogues. Will you check them?
No. 1
M: My room is so hot that I can hardly breathe.
F: Why don't you buy [get] an air conditioner? I heard they're
having a special sale downtown this weekend.
M: Well, but I can't afford (to buy) it.
No. 2
M: For three thousand units, we can give you a 10 % discount.
F: If we were to buy six thousand units, could you give us a 15 %
discount?
M: Yes, then it would be less than $ 3 per unit.
Thank you!
No. 1
M: My room is so hot that I can hardly breathe.
F: Why don't you buy [get] an air conditioner? I heard they're
having a special sale downtown this weekend.
M: Well, but I can't afford (to buy) it.
No. 2
M: For three thousand units, we can give you a 10 % discount.
F: If we were to buy six thousand units, could you give us a 15 %
discount?
M: Yes, then it would be less than $ 3 per unit.
Thank you!
Top answer
Hi, I wrote two dialogues. Will you check them? No.
- Hi, I wrote two dialogues.
- Will you check them?
- No.
- 1 M: My room is so hot that I can hardly breathe.
- F: Why don't you buy [get] an air conditioner?
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Hi,
I wrote two dialogues. Will you check them?
No. 1
M: My room is so hot that I can hardly breathe.
F: Why don't you buy [get] an air conditioner? I heard they're
having a special sale downtown this weekend.
M: Well, but I can't afford (to buy) it. Say 'well' or 'but', but you don't need to say both together.
No. 2
I wrote two dialogues. Will you check them?
No. 1
M: My room is so hot that I can hardly breathe.
F: Why don't you buy [get] an air conditioner? I heard they're
having a special sale downtown this weekend.
M: Well, but I can't afford (to buy) it. Say 'well' or 'but', but you don't need to say both together.
No. 2
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