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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English?

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you check them?

No. 1

M: What's your specialty [major]?

F: It's an ecology. I research the quality of water in the river

and propose [recommend] how to improve it.

M: Unbelievable! That's what I do! Have we met somewhere before?

No. 2 At the parking lot

M: Where did you park your car?

F: We're almost there. Row one, row two ... that black car is mine.

M: Well...that's not yours [your car].

F: It has to [should] be. Oh, isn't this the third floor? Darn it!

Thank you!
  

Top answer

Hi, I see only a couple of minor things. I've never heard "It's an ecology," before. If it's a subclass of the biological discipline, you haven't given us its name.

  • Hi, I see only a couple of minor things.
  • I've never heard "It's an ecology," before.
  • If it's a subclass of the biological discipline, you haven't given us its name.
  • That is, if the university offers a number of different majors within the ecology department, you might say, "It's an ecology," or "it's one of the ecology majors," but there should be a better way.
  • " Perhaps I'm just looking at a typo.
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Hi,

I see only a couple of minor things. I've never heard "It's an ecology," before. If it's a subclass of the biological discipline, you haven't given us its name. That is, if the university offers a number of different majors within the ecology department, you might say, "It's an ecology," or "it's one of the ecology majors," but there should be a better way.

If your major
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Hi, Avangi. You always give me a precise comment. Thank you very much!

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