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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English?
Hello. I made two dialogues. Will you check them?
No. 1
M: Oh, this spaghetti looks good. You can eat half of this and
I'll eat the other.
F: No, I'm not so hungry. Eat as much as you like.
[all you can eat]
M: Then if it's OK with you, I'll eat three-fourths.
F: OK. I'll eat the rest.
No. 2
M: Where shall we put these dolls?
F: I think we should put them in front of the south window.
M: Sounds good. But we should keep them off the sunshine,
shouldn't we?
Thank you!
No. 1
M: Oh, this spaghetti looks good. You can eat half of this and
I'll eat the other.
F: No, I'm not so hungry. Eat as much as you like.
[all you can eat]
M: Then if it's OK with you, I'll eat three-fourths.
F: OK. I'll eat the rest.
No. 2
M: Where shall we put these dolls?
F: I think we should put them in front of the south window.
M: Sounds good. But we should keep them off the sunshine,
shouldn't we?
Thank you!
Top answer
Kenta No. 1 M: Oh, this spaghetti looks good. You can eat half of this and I'll eat the other half.
- Kenta No.
- 1 M: Oh, this spaghetti looks good.
- You can eat half of this and I'll eat the other half.
- F: No, I'm not so hungry.
- Eat as much as you like.
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KentaNo. 1
M: Oh, this spaghetti looks good. You can eat half of this and I'll eat the other half.
F: No, I'm not so hungry. Eat as much as you like. [all you can eat]
M: Then if it's OK with you, I'll eat three-fourths of it.
F: OK. I'll eat the rest.
No. 2
M: Where shall we put
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Addendum -
We should keep them out of / away from the sun" is more common than "the sunshine." (even though "sunshine" seems more logical)
We often use "sun" as a synonym for "sunshine." I'm going to lie out on the lawn and get some sun.
We should keep them out of / away from the sun" is more common than "the sunshine." (even though "sunshine" seems more logical)
We often use "sun" as a synonym for "sunshine." I'm going to lie out on the lawn and get some sun.
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I didn't notice the expression, "three quarters". Thank you very much!
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