Would you correct my email message, please?

Dear Tom,

I am transfering money for the rebuilding camp and I'd like to check your account number.

I received the following information from Mike:

Beneficiary Name: Tom X
Account Number (IBAN): GB12 00034 00056789
Beneficiary Bank Name: Bank of England
Swift Code: XCVBN
EURO and GBP Correspondent Bank: Deutsche Bank
EURO and GBP Correspondent Bank Swift code: DEHGT

Would you like me to transfer the money to the account of Bank of England or to Deutsche Bank? I just got the account number (above) of Bank of England. If you would like me to transfer the money to the account of Deutsche Bank, please, let me know your Deutsche Bank account number.

Kind regards,

Lisa Smith
Treasure, Charity X