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Ljswave Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct me?

I'm trying to make a advertising slogan of language Academy.
Please give me good ideas for me.
 I'd like you correct me simple,clear and natural. impact. ^^;
Thank you for helping out.

 That goes like:

" If you are the person that wants to communicate to share the World people with a second language for making a better World.
 Here's such a great tools that are Easy, Clear, Fun. 
 Let's enjoy together."
  

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ljswave That goes like: " If you are the person that wants to communicate to share the World people with a second language for making a better World. Here's such a great tools that are Easy, Clear, Fun. " Here's another one : " If you are the person that is willing to take on every challenge for living your better life to communicate and share the World people for making better World.

— Ljswave

  • ljswave That goes like: " If you are the person that wants to communicate to share the World people with a second language for making a better World.
  • Here's such a great tools that are Easy, Clear, Fun.
  • " Here's another one : " If you are the person that is willing to take on every challenge for living your better life to communicate and share the World people for making better World.
  • We believe we can do that in your every dream and hope by making more creative things beautifully designed ,simple to use, fun to play We just happen to find one of great ways for learning English.
  • Do you want to try it?
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ljswaveThat goes like:
" If you are the person that wants to communicate to share the World people with a second language for making a better World.
Here's such a great tools that are Easy, Clear, Fun.
Let's enjoy together."
Here's another one :

" If you are the person that is willing to take on every challenge for living your better lif
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ljswaveWe just happen to find one of great ways for learning English.
I don't think you have found it yet.

If the English teachers you employ can't produce more natural English than the sentences you have posted so far, I suggest you find new teachers.
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Dear.fivejedjon.

Thank you for your advise.
I read between the lines. By the way, I'mno't going to open my own business in the near future.
so I'mnot going to hire someone.
Imagineing If If...I would do my own business ..I just wrote them.
then I was wondering if they're natural or grammatical and so on...
English is my second language for me.

Best regards.
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