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Deoris Andrade Posted 12 years ago
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I am a student of architecture and urbanism at the XXX university and this essay aims to point out the reasons why I intend studying in a major institution in the USA , and how it will contribute undoubted in my career as an architect in XX.

When I think about the opportunity of studying in the U.S. two words come immediately in my mind: Challenge and excitement, both in a very positive way. With regard to the challenge, I consider live in another culture with a new language because I will have a different reality from what I'm used everyday and face obstacles that will serve to my personal growth and professional.

Concerning the excitement is a lifetime opportunity for experiences the North American culture, know people from all around the world with different ideas and lifestyles, see new places and try new flavors. I'm sure that I will be inspired by all this and I'll have a very rich cultural repertoire, which is essential to my career as an architect. I intend to be an outstanding architect, and this exchange will give me tools to achieve my goals and a priceless new world view.

In this challenging and exciting exchange, I intent to focus on environmental studies because I do believe in our capacity to build a society with less waste of resources and minimal environmental impacts.The areas of greatest interest to me are alternative construction techniques, new construction materials and the operation and planning of eco-friendly cities. Besides, I want to be a LEED ( Leadership in Energy and Environmental Design) accredicted professional.

I also will have a pleasure of studying North American building techniques, mainly prefabricated houses once is a quick and inexpensive way to build homes which unfortunately is not much used in XXX. Here we have a lot of problems with housing, and I feel it's too my responsibility to contribute to alleviate this situation. As a student, I participate model college architectural firm that aims to change the hierarchical relationship of client and architect and contribute socially to human development with practical alternatives, I am also a volunteer in a daycare center in a disadvantaged neighborhood in the city where the study. When I return to my home country I intend to share my knowledge and adapt the XXXX reality.

Therefore, I'm sure that the experience in the U.S. will be a life changing. I will be able to improve my interpersonal skills, sharpen my vision of the world since I will have an intense cultural repertoire. I believe that with this experience I will be a complete professional because I will be able to explore my abilities at maximum.
  
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