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Nancy1982 Posted 20 years ago
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I am writing in regards to my interest in your advertised XXX position. Currently, I am anticipating graduating with a Bachelor of Science in Electrical Engineering Technology at XXX University in December.

I worked at ABD, Inc. as an Electrical and Mechanical Technician. During that time, I have experienced multitasks and team works. I am also proficient with Function Generator, Oscilloscope Analyzer, Analog, and Digital Multimeter. In addition, I have excellence analytical skill and desire to learn. With the wealth of experience and knowledge, I feel that I am highly qualified for the position.
This position is of great interest to me, and I look forward to meeting you to further discuss my qualification. I can be reached at xxx-xxx-xxxxto arrange an interview. Thank you for the opportunity to continue my knowledge and experience.
  

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Nancy1982 I am writing in regard to your advertised *** position. Currently, I expect to graduate with a Bachelor of Science in Electrical Engineering Technology at *** University in December. I worked at ABD, Inc.

  • Nancy1982 I am writing in regard to your advertised *** position.
  • Currently, I expect to graduate with a Bachelor of Science in Electrical Engineering Technology at *** University in December.
  • I worked at ABD, Inc.
  • as an Electrical and Mechanical Technician.
  • During that time, I gained experience in multitasks and team work.
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Nancy1982I am writing in regard to your advertised *** position. Currently, I expect to graduate with a Bachelor of Science in Electrical Engineering Technology at *** University in December.

I worked at ABD, Inc. as an Electrical and Mechanical Technician. During that time, I gained experience in multitasks and team work. I am
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Thank you very much Liat. It's very helpful.

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